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Title: Qilin
Author: GW Katrina aka![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
icedark_elf
Beta:forgottenlover
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Genres: AU, Fantasy Modern
Warnings/Disclaimers: Not mine, of course, though the world they are in is.
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Pairing: Sephiroth/Zack/Cloud
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 7,687
Summary: Haunted by dreams, Zack has no idea what changes await him.
Edit: Took this down for a while. Now reposting at my IJ account.
Author: GW Katrina aka
icedark_elfBeta:
forgottenloverTheme and Number: 5 - Haunting or Occult Freak for
10_auGenres: AU, Fantasy Modern
Warnings/Disclaimers: Not mine, of course, though the world they are in is.
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Pairing: Sephiroth/Zack/Cloud
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 7,687
Summary: Haunted by dreams, Zack has no idea what changes await him.
Edit: Took this down for a while. Now reposting at my IJ account.
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I already have at least one other idea figured out, at least the concept for it.
Sephiroth. Zack. Cloud. Actors. *giggles to self*
Glad you seemed to like this.
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especially or a spirit touched couple.
I think you meant for there...
He sighed, still coming Zack’s hair with his fingers.
The combing is missing it's b...
It really had been a long time since Zack had slept beside anyone, but once he had gotten used to is, he’d been gone.
This sentence just confused me. "Gotten used to is, he'd been gone"? The "he'd been gone" is bad grammar, 'cause without the contraction its "he would been gone", which... yeah. Um, I think you want to fix that one, if only so I can figure out what exactly you were going for. *sweatdrop*
Erm, that's all I spotted. Anyway, I *love* this fic! Really interesting. Should be fun to see what else you have in store for us! *grin*
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though it's to it, and I think that's where it died ::fails as a beta::
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So, tell me, what did you think, other than the typos?
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I have one planned out for 3 - Put Your Happy Face On or Smile. Sephiroth, Zack, Cloud-actors. Cloud hates it because, since the troupe has no female actors and the women who do work it refuse to get onstage, he gets stuck playing the girl. Lots.
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*dieschokedies* Once again, Cloud ends up in a dress! Ah hell... *giggle-fit* Does that make Aeris the director? I have problems seeing anyone else managing to get Cloud into drag...
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Seph and Zack trade off the bad guy/good guy role, but poor Cloud always seems to end up the damsel.
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Do you like it, though? *pokes the massive thing* Stupid giant bunny.
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been lurking at your fics for a long while, you made me like the threesome 8D;;;
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wow
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I already got plans for the next of the
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Hard to believe they are both over a year old now. That's the longest I've ever worked on any fic.
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*looks at notes* Almost done with the first book.... Interlude four-six and the chapters.
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ya know the kind when something's *great* but ya just can't put it into words since your brain just shut down by the magnificense of it all....
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Thank you and I'm glad you liked it so much.
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Is -> it
"Blue eyes, so dark they were almost black, fixed on Zack. “This city lost is qilin, Zachary..."
Is -> it's
"“The qilin went to sleep, leaving his demon-phoenix and her western dragon without a balancing force...”"
Genderswap!materia? XD Just kidding, but should there be a switch from his to her in that sentence? I could be reading it wrong.
Now that I'm done with that part of that: ...Ohh snuggles. Lovely, lovely fic. Are we going to see any spin offs in this AU? Really fasinating, great stuff. Wow, I wish I were more prolific. XD You basically win.
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As for spin offs, I have no idea. But I did have shiny fun with it, and I'm glad you liked it.
I do hope the other AUs come out this well.
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Twas a very good and shiny thing, that it was.
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I'm slowly getting better with my world building, and I'm happy it's gone to good use. I do hope you enjoy the other AUs to come.
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Beautiful work. I think I might have to begin stalking your writing *smiles happily*.
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And I think I found another typo:
Anything more Sephiroth was going to say was lost as Jenova screeched and attacted.
attacted -> attacked
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And I'm glad you liked it. I had fun with the prompt once I had some clue of where it was going.
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Glad you liked it, and I hope you enjoy the others AUs.
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You the new tenet?” I think you wanted tenant instead?
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*goes to repost in IJ*
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