*blinks in confusion* Once again, not sure where this came from. Let me know what you think.



It was perfect.

The array was a masterpiece of design, as well it should be for the task it was design. A task he knew he could do.

It didn't matter what had happened last time. He knew where he had gone wrong, and he knew how to fix it. Ignoring the blood on his hand, he pulled his long hair back into a tail and checked over everything once more.

A form laid in the middle of the array, next to it a pile of componants. The body was disfigured, all the limbs missing. Some sat in a pile nearby, pale against the dark pool of drying blood.

Tucking away a few stray strands of golden hair, he smiled. Everything had been fixed. People who had needed to die were dead, and there was room for them. He had made sure of it.

As he knelt next to the array, he sent up a brief prayer to a god he didn't believe in.

He would get this right. He had to.

Placing his hands on the carefully drawn lines, he grinned.

The array exploded into light.

///

He had not expected this when he had come to this backwater town. The rain had made the trip even less enjoyable, but he had slogged on. Mumbling something about idiot weather people, he pulled his hat down tighter, slowly accepting the fact that water was going to continue to run down his back.

Slowly, fighting the mud at ever step, he made his way to the house. It was a nice house, not what he had been expecting, especially not with the letter that sat in his pocket. Still, he had been sent to find out what he could.

Knocking on the door, he hoped that someone was home. After the third knock, however, he heard something scream, accomponied with the flash of alchemy.

He knocked the door in, hands already sliding into his pockets. What he saw made him freeze.

There was an adult, who was crouched next to two young men, boys, really. He turned, startled, letting go of the boy he held. The child scuttled back, hiding behind the slightly slimmer of the pair. Just looking at them, he could tell they were brothers.

"Who are you? What do you think you're doing, breaking down my door?" The man demanded, anger clear in his eyes.

"I'm Lt. Col. Roy Mustang," snapped the newcomer, his eyes flickering between the man and the boys. He took in the array that was on the ground, and the achingly familiar red stones that were scattered everywhere.

Stones that the slimmer boy were slowly reaching for.

Roy didn't pay that much attention to him. Neither of the boys looked old enough to be practicing alchemy, and he didn't think the stones would harm them at all. His attention focused on the man, instead. "I heard a scream. Now, who are you, and what are you doing to these children?"

The man straightened. "I am Hohenheim Elric. These are my sons, Edward and Alphonse. Now what...?"

He never finished the sentence, as there was a crackle of alchmeic reation, and a large spike drove itself through his chest. Looking down, Hohenheim had a rather stunned look on his face as he looked down. It didn't last long as another spike slammed through his head.

Feeling rather stunned himself, Roy stared at the twitching form in shock. Then he looked at the boys.

The slim one stared back for a moment before grabbing a handful of stone and crouching next to his brother. "I won't listen to him calling himself our father. He didn't come when Mother was dying, only in time to bring me and Al back." He then carefully fed the stones to the boy Roy assumed was Al.

Once the stones were gone, Ed looked at Roy again. Holding out his hands, he glared at the man. "I will say he did a good job bringing us back, he even made sure we had our alchemy." Now confusion curled behind the violet eyes that looked at Roy. "But I don't know what we're suppose to do know?"

It was against his better judgement, but Roy knew that he could use these boys. Not to mention that he wanted to find out more of the story, and there was still a letter in his pocket. A letter written in a childish hand that pleaded his father to come home to help his mother.

A father that this boy had just killed in cold blood.

"Why don't you come with me," Roy heard himself say. "I can give you someplace to stay for a while, if nothing else."

Edward looked at him, as if measuring his soul. It made Roy uncomfortable, but then the boy smiled. It was a dark smile, true, but a real one. Holding one hand out to Al, who was looking more aware of his surroundings, Ed stood up.

"Fine," he said. "We'll go with you for now, Lt. Col. Mustang, but remember this. If you hurt my brother in any way, I will kill you."

Roy knew that was no idle promise. "Agreed." Now he smiled. The chaos after the Fuhrer's death had not been pretty, but now he might have a weapon in gaining the title for himself.

"Let's leave before anyone else shows up." he finished, then stepped back into the rain. He realized that the boys weren't behind him, and he paused. There was a loud crash from inside, and as he turned to go back in, there was the roar of a fire starting.

Outlined in flames that were just starting, the boys came out. Roy smirked, and when they had reached his side, he touched the array that was in his pocket. The fire began to burn unnaturally, completely covering the house in just moments.

Ed and Al watched silently for a moment, then turned their backs. "Let's go, Mustang-san," said Al, his eyes the same violet as Ed's. "We don't need anything here."

Ed laughed. "How perfect," he chuckled. "He came back after we didn't need him, and now we won't need him ever again. Let Mother deal with him now."

All three walked away from the fire.


From: [identity profile] bleedingsand.livejournal.com


Geh bee fuh fwee guh eeh mee...

*clicks brain on*

Ah, better. As I was trying to say, that was good and DAMN I want more.

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*purrs* I'm glad you liked. I have no idea where it came from, but I've discoverd that hating my customers has an interesting effect on my writing. It tends to be angsty. However, chatting with my friends leads me to writing fluffy meta-fics that involve Lust!Roy.

Hmm, I wonder if homunculi that can do alchemy can create others of their kind?

And I have the idea of a sequel in my head, but it'll have to wait until a few other things are done. Like Hidden Costs, NaNo, Rejection fic, my Ranma 1/2 fusion, and my idea for a Harry Potter/FMA crossover that isn't a completely horrid idea.

I find that I actually like writing FMA more than Saiyuki, and Saiyuki was a complete obsession for a while. I feel I do the characters better.

From: [identity profile] bleedingsand.livejournal.com


I look forward to what you'll write. If you don't go through with it, remember that I have a wooden bokken.

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


That's okay, Envy has a Disembowing stick. I'm rather frightened of both of you.

I know this makes me sound stupid, but who is Wrath, you or spinnyroses? I've seen both of you declared so, and can't tell if you guys are the same person, or if we just have two Wraths.

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


Cool. I was just curious, and a bit confused. Now I know. Need to fix that in my Sins Friends list.

From: [identity profile] bleedingsand.livejournal.com


*shakes head* That was a rather strange question, considering the first line in the bio for [livejournal.com profile] spinnyroses is "This is [livejournal.com profile] tears_priestess's new writing journal."

From: [identity profile] nymeria.livejournal.com


DISEMBOWELING! GODDAMNIT, THERE'S AN 'L' IN THERE!

*Breaks down in tears on the floor*

In other words, good fic! *Wants more*

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*whimpers* Sorry, sorry. *bows*

I didn't actually intend for this to be more than a one parter. It was just some strangness that was spawned by my brain. Sorry.

From: [identity profile] maboroshi-hime.livejournal.com


whoa... are you continuing this? Because you've sparked my curiosity and I must know. O__@

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


Sadly enough, I hadn't. I'm not opposed to anyone else taking this up, though.

From: [identity profile] hagane-no.livejournal.com


Woah, strange O-o Strange in an interesting way, not a bad way O-o

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


Even I think it's strange. *smiles* It's amazing what standing at the register, deciding you hate all humanity will make you right. Bascially the same thing I blame Regret on.

Glad you're intrigued.

From: [identity profile] melts.livejournal.com


OOH....dark. Me like ^__^

Must threaten ask you for more fic!!

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*smirks* I can become impervious. Threaten away. And people like you are the reason I like to write. It's nice to be liked. *grins* And anything in particular that you want written? I know Envy keeps threatening for more Hidden Costs.

From: [identity profile] melts.livejournal.com


Yes..continue the Hidden Costs!! I have to know what happens to Ed..XD;;

and are you going to continue this fic and see where it goes??

From: [identity profile] wanderingwidget.livejournal.com


GWAHHHHHHHHHHH! moreplease. I like this too, dammit. My favorite part? The image of Ed slaughtering Hoenheim >D I am messed up. Wonder what use Roy will put them to, eh?

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


Don't know if I'll do more in this particular ficlet universe. I like the idea, but it'll be after NaNo and the other nine hundred projects I have going if I do get back to it. As I've said already, though, everyone is welcomed to do their own. It'll be fun.

And it was fun writing Hoenheim's death. *evil smirk*

From: [identity profile] wanderingwidget.livejournal.com


WAH! heh heh heh, teh nano! XD Good luck with that, have you written your insanely large ammount of words for the day?

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*laughs* You do love the twists, don't you. I was trying to make people think the person at the beginning was Ed, but I don't know how sucessful it was. Even if it didn't work, everyone seems to like it anyway.

*purrs* I like praise. Praise make me a happy homunculi.

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


Well then my day is complete. *smiles* I like making people happy, when I'm not tormenting them with cliffhangers. And I'm glad you liked them. When people say they like my stuff, it encourages me to write more.

From: [identity profile] wiccat.livejournal.com


Hehehe, I really like the ficcies that make Edo evil and then send him off to torment Envy. Angst is so much better than pointless romance.

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


I kinda have one in Impossible. Hmm. *thinks about it* You know, everyones always making Ed/Roy/Al/Random good guy converting one of the homunculi, lets make it go the other way around. How can I make Ed evil, besides him recreating the Sins and deciding to take over the world?

From: [identity profile] wiccat.livejournal.com


I've never read one where the good guys converted a homunculi O_O That's interesting, got any links?

Well, the thing is, if Ed's recreated everyone and they're all under his control, it doesn't really leave very many characters to influence his decision whether to go good or bad. Unless you have maybe one of the lesser characters (Armstrong, Havok, etc...) "investigate" what seems like suspicious behavior in Roy, Hawkeye, other good guys turned homunculi, and all the while Ed's trying to "save" humanity by perfecting them with alchemy... The investigating character confronts Ed about it, being too harsh and driving Ed further towards his goal, convincing himself he's making the right choice for everyone.

Um... I'm just gonna stop rambling right there...
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