I liked the way this chapter ended, but I did see one misspelling that stood out... I don't know how to quote, but Quietly, Could stood up and walked to the front door, is what I see, instead of Cloud.
I'm surprised Zack didn't jump on them when he found them... that's what I would've done XP
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Date: 2006-11-10 06:10 am (UTC)I'm surprised Zack didn't jump on them when he found them... that's what I would've done XP