Date: 2006-05-21 06:06 am (UTC)
I noticed a mistake here...

"from shooting Zack as the man colleted Cloud"

But that was it. And my *God* but did I adore this! Snarky Cloud is love, yes. But how the *hell* did they get their hands on Cloud? 'Cause I can't help but think that of all their little group, Cloud's the most dangerous. *sweatdrop*

Oh, and this line...

“Zack, telling the head of the local mob family that he looks like something a monkey shit out backwards is not a good way to make friends.”

...made me laugh *so* hard I was afraid I was gonna wake someone up. *snickers* *Awesome* little ficlet. And here's to hoping you and other people write more. ...'Cause I can't write. Damn.
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