Here's the pic it's based off of.

Mako gives you tentacles

Gay tentacle porn. How awesome is that. You should already know who's going to be in it if you looked at the pic.

I'd like to note that this is all [livejournal.com profile] dogmatix_san's fault. Completely and totally.

Kindly betaed by [livejournal.com profile] renquestor, [livejournal.com profile] forgottenlover, and as soon as I get it back, [livejournal.com profile] omega_shadow197. I know, I'm horrible at waiting. *shuffles feet* But I will make any needed changes.



“Seph, leave the kid alone! You’re gonna hurt him if you get too rough, you know that!”

Cloud knew he should leave. He really should. Sephiroth had just come back from the Mako booster, and his reactions were off the scale. Already Sephiroth had tried to pin Cloud against the wall. For some reason, he was fixated on the blond. If it hadn’t been for Zack, Cloud would have had a very rough time.

Never mind that it kind of appealed to him. That was part of the reason he was staying. The rest was that he could see the pain on Sephiroth’s face.

Mako boosters made the recipients edgy, aggressive, and prone to acts of violence. Those who had gained the tentacles, all SOLDIERs First Class, had it even worse. Sensory reception went sky high, and they were insanely reactive to any outside stimuli.

Zack had gone through the same phase last month, after his booster.

Now, instead of leaving like he should, Cloud found himself in the right place to help catch Sephiroth. The man’s limbs had given out, and only the quick moves from Zack and Cloud had kept him from hitting the floor. A strange noise escaped Sephiroth, and Cloud heard Zack make some type of purring hiss. Another thing changed by the Mako was the vocal cords. Cloud didn’t have a chance in hell of copying that noise.

Whatever the sound was, it seemed to help sooth Sephiroth a bit, as he stopped thrashing. He was still so tense, arms outstretched, teeth gnashing. Zack had his tentacles curled around Sephiroth, trying to both support his friend and to keep him off of Cloud.

He missed at least one.

Cloud stiffened when he felt something curl around his leg. A quick glance down showed that it bore green markings, not violet. Not Zack’s.

Looking up, he found himself starting straight into green eyes. Sephiroth made a noise very similar to what Zack had, and Cloud felt another of the limbs curl around his leg, higher this time.

His sudden stillness finally caught Zack’s attention. Violet eyes flickered from Cloud, down towards his leg, and then back to Sephiroth.

“Seph, let him go. He’s not like us. I’m sure you’ve noticed the lack of limbs.”

“Yeessss,” hissed Sephiroth, eyes still locked with Cloud’s.

“Please, Seph, don’t make me....”

Whatever Zack had been about to say was lost forever as Cloud interrupted him. “It’s okay, Zack. Really, it is.”

That was not what Zack had expected to hear. His head snapped up so fast that Cloud was positive he could hear the dark haired man’s neck pop. Now he was the focus of two sets of glowing eyes. Tearing his focus off of Sephiroth, he looked at Zack. “It’s okay, Zack. He needs this.”

A moment of quiet. “I don’t want you to get hurt, Cloud.”

That made Cloud smile. “That’s what you’re here for,” he said simply, because that was really the most obvious thing in the world.

Sephiroth, having received some permission, flung himself upward, pulling his tentacles loose from Zack’s with ease. Several curled around Cloud, pulling him tight against the older man. Once again, Cloud found himself the target of those burning green eyes. His mouth gaped open to say something, and Sephiroth swooped in to kiss him.

It was a hard, desperate thing, and Cloud moaned into it as Sephiroth slid his hands under Cloud’s shirt. A second set of hands joined Sephiroth’s, and Cloud felt a hard chest pressed against his back. A kiss was brushed over his neck, then Zack spoke, sending shivers down Cloud’s spine.

“Seph, pull back the stingers. I don’t want him sick like that again.”

Cloud was vaguely grateful for Zack’s remembrance of those things, since Sephiroth’s kiss was doing strange things to his brain. He and Zack had found out the hard way that the liquid that came from the stingers was rather toxic to the human system. Not something he wanted to repeat.

More limbs wrapped around him, and Sephiroth’s hands left his skin. Another moan from Cloud, but it was cut short as he realized that said hands were working at his pants. He was already so hard it hurt, and this had only been going on for few minutes. The freedom he got as Sephiroth tore the pants open and pulled him out was blissful.

Then Sephiroth pulled out of the kiss and dropped. Cloud keened when that hot mouth wrapped around his cock, wet tongue already at work. The only thing that kept him on his feet was the tentacles Zack had wrapped around him. Other than that, the dark haired man was not helping Cloud stay upright, as he was enjoying himself by tracing lips and teeth over the invisible patterns of Cloud’s neck and ear. His hand was reaching down to stroke that place along Cloud’s hip that made him arch into the mouth on him.

Dazed eyes opened when he felt something brush against his cheek. There was one of Sephiroth’s tentacles, the green marks darkened. Before it could move again, or Cloud do anything, one of the hands on Cloud’s hip came up and cupped the limb. Zack, leaning over Cloud’s shoulder, traced some of the marks with his tongue. Sephiroth moaned, drawing a answering sound from Cloud as the sensation rolled through him.

“Just checking,” purred Zack before letting go. Cloud knew what was going to happen, and his mouth opened as the tentacle pressed against it.

Those who had the tentacles rarely used the tips to travel on, preferring the thicker middle parts. The tips were much too sensitive, and if too much pressure was placed on them, leaked fluid. Or, as Zack and Cloud had discovered, they also leaked fluid when the person was excited in a sexual manner. Like now.

The tentacle reminded him of Zack before Zack had gone in for the shot to make him a First Class and came out changed. Hard and hot in his mouth, tasting of salt and a bitter aftertaste, and a pulse against his tongue. He let his tongue flutter against the tentacle, sucking on it much like he would a cock. Though tentacles were much more flexible, and even more sensitive, especially after the booster. Less than a minute after he took it in his mouth, Cloud felt the tentacle twitch, and his mouth flooded with more bitterness, and he swallowed quickly.

Nor was he far behind. Moaning around the limb in his mouth, Cloud shivered as he came, white spots flashing behind his eyes. Sephiroth’s mouth was hot around him throughout it all, and Cloud couldn’t believe he had just gotten a blow job from the General.

Cloud liked powerful men. Especially the ones with tentacles. It was his weakness, one that he enjoyed fully.

Hands were pulling at his pants before Sephiroth pulled away from his body. They must have belonged to Sephiroth, because Zack’s hands were moving Cloud’s head so that they could kiss. Cloud loved to kiss Zack. The man believed that every kiss should be savored, enjoyed, and prolonged as long as possible.

Feeling Zack’s tongue running against his made Cloud shiver. Especially when Zack pulled back and looked at him with half closed eyes. “You taste like him,” he purred before leaning in to continue the kiss.

So caught up in the kiss, Cloud didn’t realize what the third of their group was doing until he felt slick fingers pressing against him. He sighed into the kiss and let Zack take all his weight, legs spreading. Zack hummed back, and Cloud felt a nip against his hip.

It didn’t take long for preparation, and Sephiroth rose up again. Since Zack had Cloud’s mouth, he took his turn against the pale length of neck, and left a line of nips and kisses. Cloud knew he was going to have marks the next day.

His cry when Sephiroth pushed into him was almost airy, as Zack had just kissed him breathless. It did something for Sephiroth, though, because he growled and the tentacle he had in Cloud began to move. Not just thrusting, but some type of withering inside of him that made Cloud’s eyes roll up into his head. Little sparks of pleasure were running though him, though it would be a bit before he’d be able to react properly to them, but they felt so good that Cloud couldn’t help but make little noises.

Tentacles were tight against him, and Cloud thought more than once that they were going to keep tightening until he broke, but Zack never let it get that far. If he hadn’t been there, Cloud would have never done this.

Not that Zack wasn’t enjoying himself as well. Sephiroth must have decided to put his mouth to work as well, because there was another of the green marked tentacles there, and it was maybe the hottest thing Cloud had ever seen.

Then Sephiroth spoke for the first time.

“Mine,” he hissed, as Cloud rocked from his thrusts and Zack took him down that warm mouth. “Both of you.... mine!”

Hearing that voice, heavy with all sorts of things, lust and power and claiming them....

It shouldn't have been a turn on, but it was. Cloud shook against Sephiroth as everything seemed to happen at once. Claim of ownership, Zack pressed tight against him, hands hard on Cloud’s hips as Sephiroth used his mouth, and Sephiroth inside of Cloud, thrusts erratic, then froze as he came again. Moments later, Zack was swallowing much as Cloud had done earlier, and the tentacles around Cloud loosened.

“Mine,” growled Sephiroth again, eyes no longer burning so hot as he worked his way through the first stage of the booster.

Those words should have worried Cloud. He wasn’t an object, or a pet, and even if he was, he doubted Zack would like it. But Sephiroth had been claiming Zack too, hadn’t he?

It didn’t matter. Cloud felt tired, and with good reason. Having sex with two of the most beautiful men he knew would wear a man out. He didn’t seem to be the only one. The other two were slumping to the floor, limbs curling around each other and Cloud, and making those strange noises again. One day, Cloud hoped, he would understand what they said.

Right now, to be curled up with them, and to just hear them make those soft sounds at each other was enough.

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From: [identity profile] renquestor.livejournal.com


As this is my first time reading tentacle porn, I'm kinda at a loss for specifics that you are looking for. As such I looked for grammatical errors and whatnot. Found only one.

It should have been a turn on, but it was.
-I'm guessing you mean shouldn't instead of should

Overall, good story. I rather enjoyed it.

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


That works. I got someone else looking at it as well, so hopefully they'll catch character deviations.

But they have tentacles.

From: [identity profile] owleyes-arisen.livejournal.com


This works. It feels like it shouldn't work, but it does - and it feels strangely right, if you know what I mean.
Sequel? Please?

From: [identity profile] minorbones.livejournal.com


ok...now tell me here if i am weird, but uh...is it wrong to find this somewhat touching in some sort of bizzaro-like world sort of way? no? I mean..i don't normally read stories that involve tentacles..(at least not like this..) but of all the ones i have read i would have to say this one was the most touching. ^_^ Heh, i make myself laugh.

you know what i think it is..no matter what context of the story may be, if you put Zack in it it automatically makes it a warm hearted story..if you put Cloud in it it automatically makes it a drama fic and if you throw Sephiroth in it it automatically makes it disturbingly erotic.. When you put them all together and add tentacles you get...this! I personally like it..but i am easily entertained. It was writted well..so i have no beef with that.

why am i talking so much? Anyway, cool! I'm glade i looked at the picture first..it made it a lot easier to understand.

From: [identity profile] minorbones.livejournal.com


Ah! you left a comment when i was leaving one..Yea see you agree! It should be wrong but it just..isnt. How can one not like it?

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*grins* I'm glad you liked it. I apparently have that knack for doing this stuff. Write Mpregs that make sense, do genderswitch crack and it make sense, write tentacles and make it work. *grins*

Sequel? *squeaks* Um, maybe. I hadn't intended one, but I'm both easily bunnied and easily bribed. Just ask [livejournal.com profile] forgottenlover

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


Touching would be a good word for it. *grins*

Glad you liked it. I try to add some type of explaintions to my fics, so it doesn't come across completely illogical.

Now, is it those characters in general? Because I notice that a lot myself. Though I'm thrilled that you involve tentacles and get this, and it was good enough you enjoyed it.

Pic was the only reason for this fic, that and Cloud was showing his pervy side and told me in no uncertain terms that if Aeris could pounce him in the dressing room, he could sleep with the boys.

Muses. *shakes head and sighs*
ext_18500: My non-fandom OC Oraania. She's crazy. (Did it hurt)

From: [identity profile] mimi-sardinia.livejournal.com


Oooooooh! Now I have this insane thought of how paranoid Cloud would be during game events hiding his own tentacles from everyone.

I've heard rumours in the HP fandom of Giant Squid porn but I generally don't look for tentacle porn - usually tentacled creatures are not appealing (I like reading quadrapedal beastiality though - Padfoot, Moony, Nanaki in this fandom) but humans with secret tentacles? I like that! ^_^

Hmm, I wonder what Aerith thinks of tentacles?

From: [identity profile] electrainverted.livejournal.com


Woman! Step away from the tentacles and... uh... go back to Gracious Twist, otherwise I'll be forced to... um. :O
(Do not give me more ideas for Jenova!Sephiroth/Cloud for Storm. D: )

Anyway, cool. xD Nothing much can phase me, and this was just cool (pure porn fics/scenes stopped really interesting me a bit back, but I read them every now an then). :D

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*grins* I don't think you can hide tentacles like that.

I've never written tentacle porn before, and rarely do I even write porn, but this was fun.

*headdesk* Gods. She's pretty pervy. She probably like them as much as Cloud. *had mental image of Zack with a goofy smile as Cloud and Aeris pet his tentacles*

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*pets tentacle porn* You might want to tell them to stop putting ideas in my head then. *points to the other reviewers* Because now I 've got Aeris/Zack/Cloud tentacle porn running through my head.

Gracious is on the list, but I'm working on the next chapter of Another Chance first.

I actually very rarely write porn. This will make my *pauses to think about it* fifth purely porn fic. I've been writing for years , too. One LotR between Merry/Pippin, two in FMA with Roy/Ed/Al, and now this and and genderswitch crack.

Though I do have porn planned for Gracious. They are going to be posted as sidestories, though. *nods*

Tentacles are fun. My Cloud was a bit too ready, and it scared me. Aeris is infecting him, I think.

From: [identity profile] electrainverted.livejournal.com


xD Innnteresting. Hm.

Which was excatly what I wanted to hear, anyway. I couldn't remember the name of Another Chance, but that one I definitey want a chapter for first! :D

That's more than me. xD I can't write sex. Not as in "too shy/nervous/whatever" but rather, they turn out crap. So, I don't write them.

Hee. Sidestories is good enough for the porn. :D Mostly, I just like to know it actually happened and/or be given the possibility to read the deed if I feel like it. x3

*grin* Slightly too ready, maybe, but yes, fun. :D

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*pauses and rereads comment*

You know you want to write that pairing. Poor tramatized Cloud, I'm sure. *purrs*

From: [identity profile] electrainverted.livejournal.com


*sniffes* Evil woman. D: I already have, for the first chapter, but there's more slithering around, and GET THOSE TENTACLES AWAY from me. D: (though, I love tentacles... xD;)
Jenova!Sephiroth is finding Cloud but utterly fascinating, irritating, and wanting to know why her "son" likes him so... DD:
ext_18500: My non-fandom OC Oraania. She's crazy. (Default)

From: [identity profile] mimi-sardinia.livejournal.com


Heh, I only saw the picture after I read this fic. I originally imagined them still mostly human, with legs but with additional apendages.

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


Aeris infected him. Pounce him once in a dressing room, and he starts enjoying tentacles. *grins*

I can't really write it either, but that doesn't stop me fromt trying.

I figured that it would be safer and better to have the porn as side fics, just to keep the sex infic down. It'll be heavily implied infic, but actual porn will be done outside of it. *grins*

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*sits on hands to keep from molesting Cloud* Everyone should love Cloud. *now has the image of a beat up little Cloud, who was just molested by Jenova!Sephiroth.*

Have I ever told you I wanted to write ficlets set in your universe? Nothing in particular, just want to write adorable ChocoboCloud ficlets. *shrugs* I like sharing universes, really.

Tentacles are fun. You know you want to use the tentacle side of the Force.

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*scoots over and pokes* Are you still dead? Because I would be torn between horrified and uttered thrilled. I don't want dead people, but if someone died from my fic in a good way, that's a hell of a compliment. *grins*

From: [identity profile] electrainverted.livejournal.com


You mean there are people who doesn't love Cloud? The blasphemy!
Stop sharing my brain. D: That's exactly the image I've got too... With tentacles withdrawing...

:D I'd love to share my universe. Always fun when inspiration spreads. So, if you ever feel like it, go ahead! :D

Don't... make me... D: Poor Cloud's got enough problem's as is, so make Jenova!Sephiroth shut up. Even though I know she'll try for another turn...

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*now has the mental image of what you just said*

Damnit! *headdesk* No. More. Tentacles. *headdeskheaddeskheaddesk*

God. Just had the image of Cloud having to use the tentacles to do something that was otherwise impossible(saving someone somehow) and then being all bashfully cute when the other confront him.

And a scene in Hojo's lab when they first appear. Gah!

From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com


*purrs* You have to write that now. I'll cry if you don't, because I want to see how everyone reacts to that.

I like Cloudtorture. Gracious is actually a long bit of CloudTorture cleverly disguised as a fic.

Whee! I can write ChocoboCloud! *goes to plot*

I can see Seph being very pissed in some buried back corner of his mind for some reason. That's his chocobo she's molesting. And she'll be "He so tasty. How can you not share him?"
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