edenfalling: stained-glass butterfly in a purple frame (butterfly)
Elizabeth Culmer ([personal profile] edenfalling) wrote in [personal profile] icedark_elf 2006-09-28 05:24 am (UTC)

Hmm. If he cared about them, he would try to help fix the pool of rot it had become. But he didn’t. That has the ring of foreshadowing, once you bring in Aeris and her troubles. I like!

I also like how attached he is to Cloud; definite loyalty there on both sides. I wonder when he learned to care about other people? Because clearly by 'canon' time he can and does...

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