ext_267523 ([identity profile] azimel.insanejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] icedark_elf 2008-12-19 06:16 pm (UTC)

YAY! More Wutai AU! It's one of my favorites of yours.

Making Dinner made me ♥. xD Which was great, because Sin made me D: at first, and then crack up laughing. And then mortality, oh god. Cloud is going to grow up wonderfully twisted, it seems.

And little kid Cloud sorta shoving his weight around is love.

Mini typo: "Most of the guys here he had know since he had gotten here..." -> I think you want that know to be "known."

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